::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Nice shot, but a little small. Why not go for the full 640 pixels wide?
Composition:
I like the diagonal composition of this shot. It works well for it.
Subject:
Clear and stands out well against the negative space.
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color: The black and white treatment is good here. Good midtone contrast. Works well.
Focus is sharp. Especially for a hit and run shot :-)
Light: This is good. A few hot spots here and there. You might want to diffuse the light a bit more for similar shots.
To grow its vote?:
I think it's kinda under-rated, but the image size probably hurt you some. Also, ther is a hot pixel on the can that could have easily been cloned out.
Summary:
Cool shot, definitely under-rated. Keep up the good work and the scores will come to you.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |