Well you should see Polythene Pam
She’s so goodlooking but she looks like a man.
Well you should see her in drag.
Dressed in her polythene bag.
Yes you should see Polythene Pam – Yeh.
Get a dose of her in jackboots and kilt
She’s killer diller when she’s dressed to the hilt.
She’s the kind of a girl that makes the
News of the World.
Yes you could say she was attractively built – Yeh.
Had a blast shooting this. Could not find one of my male friends to dress up for this shot, but one of my female friends thought it was a neat idea. She even let me post it online :)
The idea was to have a drag queen like model sitting like a queen between plastic bags, but this was eventually the end result.
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Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one: Neat shot and I like the plastic look you seem to have been trying to achieve. She doesn't look much like a man though ;-)
Composition: I like the square crop, but I think I want to see it a little less tight. It's sorta feeling crowded the way it is.
Subject: Clear, in your face and works well.
Technical (Color, focus, and light): Color: A bit warm for my tastes, but not overly distracting.
Focus: Focus looks sharp, but perhaps could stand a little more USM in post.
Light: I like it, it works well for you, other than beinga bit warm.
To grow its vote?: I'm sure you got voted down a bit for the Neat Image, overprocessing. Not really anyway around that with what you were trying to do. That's more the fault of the voters. Colling the WB might have helped some as would a bit less crowded composition.
WAY WAY WAY too much neat image
i understand you want a plastic look, but woah, this was a bit much especially around her eyes. the skin i could see, but you've lost all definition around the eyes and the lips
Love the colors and expression. There is an overprocessed look about this as if too much Neat Image was used. The skin looks plastic - maybe that's what you where looking for based on the title. 7
Well you should see Polythene Pam
She's so good looking
But she looks like a man
Well, you should see her in drag
dressed in a polythene bag
Yes you should see Polythene Pam
Yeh, yeh, yeh
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