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06/08/2006 01:19:27 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
First of all, congrats on your highest scoring entry to date. Also, this is a remarkable improvement, as echoed by the voters, from your first entry. Nice work.
Camera Work/Technical: Everything in the frame is nicely focused, and the white balance seems on as all the colors look exactly as my eye would expect them to look.
Lighting: I think that the lighting is the main strength of you photograph. You did a great job with the side light source. I really like the highlight on the curve of the knife handle. It is just enough to set it off from your black background.
Composition/Content: You had a nice start with the composition, but I think that your chosen crop feels a little crowded. I'd like to see just a little more space at the bottom of the bottle.
My Opinion: While not a Beatles fan (I don't know very many of their songs), I think that you met the challenge well. I am with you on this one, never heard it before. Nicely creative. I think that this one scored pretty close to its potential. It was just a little too commonplace to do a great deal better.
Eric
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06/06/2006 05:47:39 PM |
| nice shot, side light a little harsh |
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06/04/2006 11:45:53 PM |
| always fun to play with our food. good creativity and humor |
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06/04/2006 10:56:44 PM |
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06/03/2006 10:10:08 PM |
| Very well portrayed as total victory for mean Mr. Mustard. Bump. |
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06/02/2006 12:33:04 PM |
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06/02/2006 12:35:07 AM |
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06/01/2006 10:22:27 PM |
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06/01/2006 05:07:51 PM |
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05/31/2006 10:35:45 PM |
lol - that's some mean mustard! Nice setup, lighting may have needed a bounce from the left to stay the sharp shadows but maybe that would have taken some of the drama / harshness of this heinous mustard crime! :)
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05/31/2006 09:42:32 PM |
| This is bad or rather Mr. Mustard is very bad! Funny idea. Well done. |
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05/31/2006 09:04:11 PM |
| I instantly cracked up when I saw this, great humor. It's hard to see the knife with the black background though. |
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05/31/2006 08:30:34 PM |
| This one really made me smile, great imagination, 10. |
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05/31/2006 07:45:03 PM |
| very creative, i really laughed when i saw this! |
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05/31/2006 05:21:24 PM |
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