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06/07/2006 08:55:48 PM |
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Nice warm shot fits the title and challenge well.
Composition:
I'm not that educated with landscape type shots, but I think yoou could have strengthened this composition a bit by excluding some of the dark space at the top of the photo and moving the sun a little further left in the composition.
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color: Warm feeling and I like it.
Focus seems good.
I love the light play in this image. Good work.
To grow its vote?:
More dramatic post processing could have helped some. Also, strengthening the composition would have helped.
Summary:
I really like this shot, very warm and inviting.
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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06/05/2006 12:59:15 AM |
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06/04/2006 04:20:11 AM |
nice , tied for 2nd in my voting
I'm a sucker for those clouds |
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06/03/2006 10:34:32 PM |
| Hot and eloquent in projecting outwards. Bump. |
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06/03/2006 10:09:14 PM |
| Good capture, good title to put with it. |
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06/02/2006 08:05:22 PM |
| Very dramatic sky! Lovely colors. Depending on what was there, I might have liked to see a bit more of the foreground. Unless of course there were pawn shops and paycheck loan places. Well done. Among my favorites! |
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06/02/2006 03:17:45 PM |
| Wowwwwwwwwwww!!!!!!! That is one beautifully photographed sunrise!!! |
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06/01/2006 10:39:58 PM |
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06/01/2006 12:30:08 AM |
| fits in nicely with the title, great shot. |
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05/31/2006 07:26:50 AM |
| I don't like the buildings involved in this picture. Actually whenever I listened to the song I was imagining some nature. |
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