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06/05/2006 01:38:48 AM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
oh dear .. I really do dislike when the horizon is crooked ... it takes a minor rotation to correct and make an ok shot a good one.
Composition:
To my understanding I think that this would have worked well if you had the horizon on the horizontal thirds line and then the sky .. not too sure .. but may help a little.
Subject:
Doe it meet the challenge, if you had a cyclist in the shot enjoying the view yes. If you don't the picture does not stand on its own without the title.
Technical (Colour and light):
Colours are good and lighting is great. The border is perhaps a little heavy.
To grow its vote?:
Include a cyclist .. and think about how the picture really represents what you want it to.
Summary:
Godo work and a lovely picture.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/29/2006 11:14:07 PM |
| Nice shot. Next time make sure your horizon is straight. Also, the frame is a bit heavy for such a beautiful view. |
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05/29/2006 10:50:51 PM |
| Great focus, it's not spesific, but it seems like you filtered the greens and blues. |
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05/29/2006 08:13:08 PM |
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05/28/2006 09:39:31 PM |
| The photo is nice...not sure how it correlates to the title or the category. |
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05/27/2006 05:27:49 PM |
| beautiful picture, but the big black border is a real shame. I mean, there is so much light going on in the foto, why disturb it with such a border? |
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05/25/2006 01:07:17 PM |
| Simply beautiful! Wonderful coloring and composition. Great shot! |
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05/25/2006 12:03:12 PM |
YOur title, and the image are confusing. Sorry, but, I am not convinced.
This however is an excellent image.
Nice comp, maybe just a bit tighter crop, great color, great light, great texture, nice movement
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