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06/04/2006 07:03:02 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
There are so many contradictory comments on this image, it really is up to you who if any your listen to.
First Impression - the most important one:
Yup .. lonely and all alone .. but the title is what i have to look at t make the story complete.
Composition:
I like this composition. It works... I think in order to really make the image i would have turned the models head and place it resting on the hand ... this puts across a slight destitute feel.
Subject:
Meets the challenge, but the title does help it get there.
Technical (Colour and light):
Lovely .. I like the siluoette .. I like the colours in the sky.
To grow its vote?:
Think about how you use a model to convery what you are looking for, otherwise it can look just like a lucky snapshot.
Summary:
Great work .. and well done.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/30/2006 10:34:20 PM |
| I really like the mood and the feeling this image shows..... |
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05/30/2006 05:32:13 PM |
| Hey, why don't I take some obscure photograph that has nothing to with the challenge, and then give it a title which barely fits, but is passable, and hope that I will win? Good picture none the less. |
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05/29/2006 09:06:06 PM |
| like the picture, need to not have him as central point |
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05/28/2006 03:12:55 PM |
| Very colours. The silhouette ads a contrast too it. |
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05/28/2006 02:02:45 AM |
| Only your title says there's failure in this photo and that's not enough for me. I don't see failure in the photo, all I see is a man enjoying sunset sitting on a bench at a lake. |
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05/26/2006 01:33:51 PM |
| A beautiful, serene shot, but I have to mark it down a bit for this challenge because, without the title, I get absolutely no sense of failure. Yes, he's alone, but I don't get the impression he's unhappy about that. |
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05/25/2006 06:09:30 PM |
| Nice work with the weeping feel that the tree provides, but the water line looks tilted hard to the right. I like the composition, the silhouetting , and I think that the square cropping works very well. |
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05/25/2006 11:35:34 AM |
| The colors in the sky are outstanding and the silohuette of the single guy and the trees is great. |
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05/24/2006 03:35:17 PM |
| nice idea. Great use of contrast |
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05/24/2006 02:30:09 PM |
| just a tad too soft and dark for me... |
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05/24/2006 06:03:25 AM |
| Lovely photo, very well framed and gorgeous colours. |
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05/24/2006 01:35:35 AM |
| Beautiful colors and contrast! The photo also expresses the title perfectly. :) |
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05/24/2006 01:04:52 AM |
| The loneliness of the situation is very well portrayed here. The darkness, and blues add to that feeling. The yellow tones and beauty of the scene give me hope for him. A wonderful combination. |
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