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06/04/2006 06:56:04 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
busy and colourful and full on.
Composition:
This is so busy bit the main focus of the main medal with the two side verticals is extremely centred, which is a little off putting.
Subject:
This is interesting for some this would meet the challenge, and others like me would go ... so what - this actually doesn't mean anything to a lot of people and I don't think that helped in the voting. I have been caught out by this a number of times with people not understanding the significance of a shot.
Technical (Colour and light):
This works well .. I like the lighting and the fantastic range of colours.
To grow its vote?:
Appeal to the populace ... so hard to do ...
Summary:
Great eye and good shooting .. keep it up.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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06/01/2006 10:30:53 PM |
Having lived in Mobile for over 30 years, I can definitely say, this picture definitely captures the essence of Mardi Gras, Mobile Style. You have done an excellent job in capturing Mardi gras at its finest!!. Good Job!! |
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Comments Made During the Challenge  |
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05/29/2006 11:34:37 AM |
I haven't lived in La in 13 years and I don't know if i have seen a moon pie since then! |
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05/26/2006 05:01:56 PM |
A lot of brilliant color and evocative objects, but the overall effect is too overwhelming. |
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05/25/2006 04:31:52 PM |
'Cept for the Moon Pie, which isn't exactly a culinary triumph. |
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05/24/2006 01:51:16 PM |
there's a lot going on in this photo ...a bit too busy for my taste |
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