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06/04/2006 03:59:56 PM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
You got what you want .... a pile of controversy :)
Composition:
The fountain hits thirds .. the top of the house hits thirds .. but it still feels centred ... not sure why ...
Subject:
Does it or not ... really I am from NZ .. and it doesn't do much for me ... but in your country it may.
Technical (Colour and light):
Nice Colours and natural light .. both work well .. .also a good sharp picture.
To grow its vote?:
Do something that says something to all .. .the problem is that this site is not made up of mainly americans .. so it doesn't say much to a lot of people ... and those it does it seems you offended some of them.
Summary:
I like this as an architechture shot ... which is currently voting and think it would have done ok in there. But is a personal statement and I think worked well for that. Keep it up .. I personally like challenging peoples thinking too.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via
the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/30/2006 05:25:07 PM |
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05/29/2006 05:24:12 PM |
| I wish I thought of this concept... =) |
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05/28/2006 08:26:01 PM |
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05/28/2006 02:19:23 AM |
| You're referring to the people inside the house and you're allowed to have your opinion about them being all mad, but all I see in the photo is a big, white house with a fountain in front and a flag on top. Your photo doesn't show failure. |
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05/26/2006 04:44:45 PM |
| not to get too driven by symbols but i love the shadows and the lighting, When i look at the shadows i get the impression its late in the day, perhaps late in someone else's day as well ;) And the shadows give me a feeling of darkness and gloom which i think is fitting for the subject. |
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05/26/2006 01:52:04 PM |
| Beautiful shot, and I agree. It'll be interesting to see the range of voter sentiments. |
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05/26/2006 06:15:06 AM |
| lol. I dont know if everyone would see the "power house" of US as failure. Is it? 6. |
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05/26/2006 05:41:21 AM |
| nice political comment, true to a point. oh yeah good crisp image too.-7- might be even better as a B&W |
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05/25/2006 07:55:15 PM |
I absolutly hate when people express their political beliefs with their (challenge)photographs. It sickens me!
Message edited by author 2006-05-31 00:22:44. |
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05/25/2006 11:27:01 AM |
| very nice shot, and very funny as well. it could be a little better if the fountian was in the center of the building. |
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05/25/2006 10:24:32 AM |
| Sad bring politics into here nice that its in your opinion. Too high of a contrast on the trees learn to contrast mask areas and control lighting. |
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05/25/2006 03:10:47 AM |
| I just don't like political statements where I go for enjoyment whether I agree or disagree. |
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05/24/2006 11:45:04 PM |
| I see failure only in your title. |
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05/24/2006 10:24:35 PM |
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05/24/2006 10:04:51 PM |
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05/24/2006 09:21:47 PM |
| lol! hahaa... awesome pic |
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05/24/2006 05:45:03 PM |
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05/24/2006 02:39:44 PM |
| uh-oh, politics...bound to split the vote (pun) |
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05/24/2006 01:44:52 PM |
| hahahahahhahahahahahahahahahha 10 for the best interpretation of failure! |
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05/24/2006 05:48:09 AM |
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05/24/2006 01:52:15 AM |
| I can't think of anything that better expresses the concept of "failure". ;) |
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