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06/05/2006 01:27:21 AM |
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Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
I think that this is, as you suggest, a stretch for success.
Composition:
The lines o the pond draw the eyes into the picture .. which is great.
Subject:
Well it meets the challenge in that it is good each day to wake .. but the picture does not hold its own without the title .. therefore the DNMC's i nthe voting are probably valid.
Technical (Colour and light):
I like this processing .. yes its over the top, but it really works well for this image.
To grow its vote?:
Meets the challenge .. that is a good start .. if taking something out of the box the image needs to stand on its own.
Summary:
Good shooting, you have a good eye .. keep using it.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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06/05/2006 01:27:17 AM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
I think that this is, as you suggest, a stretch for success.
Composition:
The lines o the pond draw the eyes into the picture .. which is great.
Subject:
Well it meets the challenge in that it is good each day to wake .. but the picture does not hold its own without the title .. therefore the DNMC's i nthe voting are probably valid.
Technical (Colour and light):
I like this processing .. yes its over the top, but it really works well for this image.
To grow its vote?:
Meets the challenge .. that is a good start .. if taking something out of the box the image needs to stand on its own.
Summary:
Good shooting, you have a good eye .. keep using it.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/30/2006 11:49:12 PM |
| a little over-processed--the color banding in the clouds is a bit too extreme. nice effort under basic editing, though. |
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05/30/2006 12:02:16 AM |
| That is beauuuuutifullllllll love it.. |
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05/29/2006 10:38:10 PM |
| Colors are surreal. I mean that in a nice way. |
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05/29/2006 01:48:29 PM |
| The sky looks like it has way too much cotrast. |
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05/27/2006 02:00:07 PM |
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05/26/2006 05:06:30 AM |
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05/25/2006 02:06:08 PM |
| This is a beautiful photo, but not - to my mind anyway - right for this challenge. It's a pretty narrow definition of success - being awake one more day. |
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05/24/2006 01:48:11 PM |
| a bit over processed for my taste ... |
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