Man this is a really cool image. I really like what you have done. I think the focus could be a little sharper and the crop a little tigher would greatly improve an already great image. I think this would have scored better if you were to crop more off of the right hand side of the photo. I see some lines just below where the finger meet the hand. That could be a little motion blur. I really wish the pinky finger was not in the way of the viewing of the flame. The red hot charcoal really adds to this also. Nice image IMO.