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06/04/2006 04:52:06 AM |
Hello, Greetings from the Critique Club.
As requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission. Please keep in mind this is a personal opinion.
First Impression - the most important one:
Aaaw.. too bad it isn't in focus... but the colors are amazing!
Composition / PoV:
The composition looks allright, might have cropped a bit off the right. I'm guessing lots of voters thought it was a real house (very clever of you to use a tea-candle burner!). To increase that effect, you might have taken the photo straight and a bit lower (from the ground).
Subject:
This does fit the challenge.
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Focus: I think you lost a lot of points with the focus.. that's a pity!
Color: The purple & yellow colors are great, but the blue doesn't really fit here IMO.
Light: The light seems to be ok.
Like I said, I think you were voted down because of the focus. But I think with your creativity, after practicing with focus, it will be better.
I hope you've found this critique helpful. Good luck with future challenges! |
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05/29/2006 09:59:34 PM |
| I think the blue detracts some from the heat feeling. However, this is a truly amazing shot. As stated before, the background gives it the proper context, and it is pretty frightening to see this. Good job. |
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05/28/2006 11:34:50 PM |
| I assume it's some sort of toy house judging by the size of the flames, but the effect is still startling and dramatic. You did a really good job of placing it in a background that makes it look like a real house. The overall effect is a Surreal nightmare. 9 |
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05/28/2006 06:01:08 PM |
| Judging by the size of the flames this is a model house? I'd like to see something in focus to grab my attention here (4) |
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05/28/2006 05:49:03 PM |
| you happened by at the right moment for this challenge. good job! |
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05/23/2006 07:06:17 PM |
| Wow this looks dangerous. The flames are a little burned out and the focus isn't very good still a pretty decent shot and great idea. |
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05/23/2006 07:56:19 AM |
| This is cool! Love the title too. 10. |
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05/22/2006 08:17:27 PM |
| The composition is ok. The image quality is not very good. The subject matter is ok. The creativity is ok. |
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05/22/2006 02:14:06 PM |
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05/22/2006 01:40:18 PM |
| Hope you didn't burn your house down especially for the challenge ;-) Nice capture though. |
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05/22/2006 08:06:04 AM |
| Focus seems very blurred but I do like the angle of the shot |
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05/22/2006 04:55:46 AM |
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