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06/05/2006 03:16:06 PM |
Hey there from the Critique Club
Camera Work/Technical: As I mentioned in my comment during the challenge, the focus seems to be off just a little. It looks like the grass is more in focus that the dead bird. Closing that aperture and using just a little fill flash would have helped this even where the camera focused.
Lighting: The lighting is pretty nice. The white down feathers at the bird's butt lost a little detail. That adds a small distraction, but the remainder of the image seems nicely lit.
Composition/Content: I like the basic composition, but it has a slight crowded feeling to it. The feather touching the bottom left corner is the sole reason for this. Opening up the crop just a slight amount would easily remedy this.
My Opinion: As is, the image score pretty close to its potential. With better focus and just a slight adjustment in the cropping, this would be well above a 5.
Eric |
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05/30/2006 11:35:35 AM |
| Sad subject. Well photographed, but I really don't want to look at it. |
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05/29/2006 07:47:45 AM |
| Similar to another picture, I can say the same: I fail to see the art in this picture. I see the failure but just being ontopic is not enough. |
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05/27/2006 10:43:05 PM |
| GRUESOME!! But, then again so is life sometimes. Sharpness and detail are right on as well as color and contrast. |
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05/26/2006 12:21:05 PM |
| So sad.. Poor little guy.. Good capture.. |
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05/26/2006 12:00:58 PM |
| What is it with all the pics of dead birds? |
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05/26/2006 01:11:02 AM |
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05/25/2006 10:05:23 PM |
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05/25/2006 07:48:27 PM |
| Nice conveyance of failure, but the focus seems to be off just a little. It looks like the grass is more in focus that the dead bird. Nice capture and pretty good composition. I would like to see the rest of that toe at the bottom of the frame. |
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05/25/2006 11:22:38 AM |
| Thats a very sad picture but the bird seems a little out of focue |
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05/24/2006 09:47:30 AM |
| What's with all the dead birds in this challenge? |
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