Hi Heather. Congrats on your 500th CC critique. Here's your comment back. :)
I think this is a very strong composition. The eyes immediately grab me, and then the hair and facial lines lead my eye down to those sensuous lips.
The high contrast - can't decide if I really like it or if the left side's a little too bright.
What I would suggest, though, is that you crop it just below the bottom of the chin or retake it without the choker. As it is, I feel like the head is floating separately from the torso. But that's minor. |
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