I like the pose here. It's very introspective for one so young, and it gives her almost a 'not here' feel - like she's in her own little world and having fun with it.
What I can see that could possibly use some improvement would be that her dress is almost overexposed, yet her face is very underexposed, which makes it hard to see clearly. The dress is so bright that it is trying to become the 'focus' of the shot. Perhaps shooting when the light is not so harsh (or carrying a large diffuser or pop-up shade with you) would help with the differences in exposure, or try to photograph her when she is wearing clothing that more closely matches her skin tones.
I know this is a 'spur-of-the-moment' capture (kids can be sooo difficult to work with! :) I know - I have a couple of my own.), so I completely understand that you have to work with what you have. |
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