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Challenge: Rhythm II (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Sony DSC-H1
Location: My backyard, Belgrade
Date: May 2, 2006
Aperture: 3,5
ISO: 64
Shutter: 1/250 sec
Galleries: Abstract, Black and White
Date Uploaded: May 2, 2006

 I'm in my dof experimenting phase. Took the keyboard outside as I'm not good at setting up the light.

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Place: 89 out of 208
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Avg (commenters): 6.2353
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Views since voting: 886
Views during voting: 313
Votes: 237
Comments: 19
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 05/14/2006 03:53:03 AM
Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club...

Nice image for the Rhythm Challenge. Compositionally this works. What I might do next time is crop a bit tigher so you don't have that white space in the corner. In regards to the DOF, it looks good, however it appears you sharpened that area a bit too much especially the top of the key so I'd try and avoid that in the future.

Other than that there isn't much else I'd change. Maybe make the white keys whiter so they provide more contrast with the black keys.

Message edited by author 2006-05-14 03:54:53.
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
05/09/2006 01:26:29 PM
wonderful interpretaion of the theme! I wish your DOF was a little bit wider, but the one key certainly makes a statement. very nice!
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 05/09/2006 07:57:38 AM
This is a better-done version of my challenge picture. Good work!
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 05/08/2006 06:55:49 PM
very blurry too. next try and zoom out a lil more
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 05/08/2006 12:47:42 PM
Nice composition. I'm seeing some zaggies. Perhaps oversharpened?
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 05/07/2006 10:19:59 PM
very nice. I wonder if a lower angle would have helped. Either way, I like it.
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 05/07/2006 12:14:26 AM
Cool title - why not G flat? Very limited dof in this shot, not sure if it helps or not.
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 05/05/2006 10:05:30 PM
I like the idea of F# key focusing
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 05/05/2006 09:09:32 PM
Best piano shot so far.
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 05/05/2006 08:15:38 AM
cool maby try crop the 1st note out or use a larger f number
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 05/05/2006 04:44:55 AM
Like the macro of the piano
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 05/04/2006 02:03:46 PM
uha - good thinking, beautifuk picture :o)
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 05/04/2006 01:57:20 PM
Of all the piano key shots, this is the best. Well done.
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 05/04/2006 11:53:23 AM
I always love piano shots. I relaly like the angle at which this is taken.
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 05/04/2006 11:45:36 AM
Best of the piano key shots yet.
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 05/03/2006 03:57:30 PM
accentuated by its over-sharp edges
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 05/03/2006 04:48:38 AM
personally would have preferred the focus on the first key and to see less of an angle to include more of the keyboard
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 05/03/2006 03:54:24 AM
nic e work here
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 05/03/2006 12:53:26 AM
Needs to be sharper, more in focus.
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