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05/13/2006 05:53:16 PM |
Critique Club:
I really like the shapes in this picture. My eyes goes all over... round after round after round :) In my opinion there are a few things that might make this picture better. Not sure if they are all correct but this is what I think.
1. Contrast. I think it could have a bit more contrast in it. The color in the edges could be darker.
2. Crop. I think a slightly wider crop. Maby where you can see the edges of the flower and have lot of dof in it.
3. Dirt on flower. I know you couldn't have done nothing about because of the basic editing but the dark spots on the flowers are a bit disctracting.
4. Larger drops. Have some larger waterdrops?
I think that is about it...
Good luck in future challanges :)
Best regard, Arni
//www.torfason.is |
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05/03/2006 11:09:39 AM |
| Cleverly done - I'm surprised by how effective this is with monochrome - it's dynamic... |
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