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05/07/2006 07:44:53 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
Hi! This is a very interesting photo and I personally feel a great choice for this challenge. The trees draw me in and take me out the top to the "brown" sky, LOL!
A few things that caught my eye right off the bat was the composition of the overall shot. There is really nothing that is keeping me in the shot, it's all fighting for my attention except for that tree in the front right. If you had cropped either that out or more around it to have it be the one for the most attention, not sure if I'm getting my point across. But what it basically comes down to, while a great overall choice for the challenge there is nothing that is standing out in the shot and telling me, "HEY LOOK!" I played with my magic envelopes a little bit and with some creative cropping, take the grass out of the bottom maybe and a little off the right to bring the front tree more on the thirds line might help with the overall feel of the shot.
I hope my comments help and wish you the best of luck in future challenges!
Deannda |
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04/30/2006 11:32:52 PM |
| i think this might have been better without the sky, the bottom is so interesting, looks like im lost in a snowstorm. |
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04/30/2006 11:15:17 PM |
| Works very well as a negative. Good choice. |
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04/30/2006 01:32:43 PM |
| Wow...very nice contrast between the white trees and brown skies! |
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04/30/2006 06:18:19 AM |
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04/29/2006 07:02:06 PM |
| Nice, but I think it would work better as a black & white. |
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04/29/2006 01:13:04 AM |
| Love the color palette and the simplicity. Fantastic. |
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04/27/2006 08:27:56 AM |
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04/27/2006 07:36:03 AM |
| I really think this works so well and they look like ghost trees...... |
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04/26/2006 11:16:38 AM |
| This is one of the few pictures I have seen so far (140 votes in) where the negative version improves the original. Well done. |
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04/26/2006 11:01:21 AM |
| photo is too busy for a negative |
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