Greetings from the CC
Hmm... well o n the plus side I like your subject, I like that her eyes really stand out and the splash of pink color on her skirt. You have also done a very good job getting a blurred effect/ DOF
I think you did poorly cause this is more of a portrait than PJ.
I am not sure that this compostion really works for me either. It is sort of different and creative, but I find myself wanting to turn my head to even her out. I think I would of liked it more if she were completely upside down vs. slanted. Or perhaps cropping a little bit tighter especially on the top and left about 1/2 inch.