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Yes my camera was sober!
Yes my camera was sober!
liltritter


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Window Framed (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Nikon D70s
Lens: Nikon AF Zoom-Nikkor 28-80mm f/3.3-5.6G
Location: My front door window
Date: Apr 23, 2006
Aperture: f/4.0
ISO: 250
Shutter: 1/200 ?
Galleries: Abstract, Humorous
Date Uploaded: Apr 23, 2006

This image was taken through the little decorative window on my front door. The darkened triangle is actually the metal between the glass pieces. Not sure how it turned out looking like this... the clone effect without an editor... I thought it was cool.

Statistics
Place: 170 out of 180
Avg (all users): 4.4017
Avg (commenters): 5.0000
Avg (participants): 4.1818
Avg (non-participants): 4.5298
Views since voting: 901
Views during voting: 399
Votes: 239
Comments: 17
Favorites: 1 (view)


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05/06/2006 12:05:38 AM
hey from the critique club :)

Hi, in case you were wondering the critique club is a coupla people from dpc who voulunteer to give somewhat in depth critiques of people challenge photos. We try to help... :)

Ok, now to the photo.. generally on dpc, the rule of thumb is if the image looks blurry, seems blurry, has a little bit of blur, and doesnt use neatimage... it not going to score well. Although you may look at this photo and say oooo i like the blur and the affect clone affect, you have to step into someone else's shoes and think how they think... critique your own image.

Technically this image is ok. The crooked lightpole detracts from the image as a whole. The thing that bothers me most about this image is the lack of negative space. Negative space is the area in the photo where there isnt really anything of interest. This photo seems really busy. You also must consider when doing photos for dpc that looking at an image at full size and looking at it at 640 pixels is totally different. Also rememeber that when you resize, you lose deatail and sharpening. I tend to do my sharpening after i resize, i just open up the pic and do it then.

Hope this helpes a little bit...

if you have any comments or questions please feel free to PM me.. :)

-Dan

P.S. like the title ;)
  Photographer found comment helpful.
05/04/2006 01:48:12 AM
I also love the title, and also love the image.
Well done dear friend.....
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/30/2006 11:07:50 PM
hahaha...great title!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/30/2006 06:01:57 PM
your camera was sober... but were you??
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/30/2006 04:03:55 PM
i used to shoot through beveled window alot i like the affect of it focusing through them and such....however this is a very small image as posted and it doesn't have the best choice of subject....would've been pretty with a flower on the otherside in the center...

nice idea could be better exicuted.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/30/2006 12:12:22 PM
Creative, but the kaleidoscope effect doesnt do anything for me personally... maybe if the subject outside the window were more interesting..
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/30/2006 11:48:21 AM
Sorry but the effect, whatever it is just gives me a headache from looking at this picture, I just want to click "3" and move on to the next photo. Just thought I should explain the low rating.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/29/2006 09:27:32 PM
this is creative, I like it a little bit.. not one of the best in the challenge, but not bad.. it had me looking for a while so that must say something...
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/29/2006 04:34:22 PM
But where you???

This really doesn't work for me.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/29/2006 09:02:09 AM
Nice effect, but the corners of the photo aren't particularly inspired. With some more vivid colours and more interesting subject matter this effect could look great.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/29/2006 08:19:34 AM
Different.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/29/2006 07:28:32 AM
very interesting honeycomb effect
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/29/2006 02:17:49 AM
This image is great. I am afraid of what the average DPC voter will do to it given its size, large boarder and abstract nature. 10.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/26/2006 11:29:43 PM
Did anyone mention that this shot is too big? ;-) I like the prism effect.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/26/2006 03:39:42 PM
Too bad your photo is a bit too small. I wonder how you did this, but it doesn't really appeal to me.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
04/25/2006 09:10:12 PM
hard to look at, but funny
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04/25/2006 12:12:01 PM
Neat idea, boring subject.
  Photographer found comment helpful.


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