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05/14/2006 10:22:23 PM |
From the CTP MkII
First Impression: It's an average photo... it doesn't have much to offer, IMO. Sorry. 4 or 5.
Composition: Your comp on this photo is what keeps it standing however the other departments get tanked. 5 or 6.
Subject: When you said lonely tree, I'd've expected more tree and less not tree. 4 or 5.
Technical: DOF's a bit too shallow, and shot's a bit underexposed. 5.
Summary: Okay, this ain't one of your best photos. T least the ones that followed it did good, right?
Disclaimer: The following crits are personal opinions, not photographic dogmas. Please see them as suggestions, not claims of mastery nor a show of hauteur.;p
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04/30/2006 08:42:14 PM |
| i like this, wish the depth of field was a littttle bit larger |
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04/30/2006 04:59:51 PM |
| I like your use of the non-traditional window for this challenge. I think it may have been better if you had more interest in the framed area. Maybe found a way to zoom in more on the lonely tree, or captured it at a slightly different angle. |
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04/30/2006 12:47:22 PM |
| If you follow the levels around it forms a spiral leading from the foreground back to the tree -- very nice effect. |
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04/30/2006 10:45:24 AM |
| Nice but I feel this would look soo much cooler with a red sunset in the sky instead of the gray blob that it is now. 5 from me. |
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04/29/2006 04:37:16 PM |
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04/29/2006 03:57:32 PM |
| I'm okay with blank skies usually but I think with the sky almost centered like this that I want to see more detail or color. |
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04/29/2006 01:15:16 PM |
| I think you picked a perfect window for framing, but there is really no subject other than the window itself. Nice focus and good exposure, but I think that there needs to be something other than the distant tree in the frame. |
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04/29/2006 12:11:35 PM |
| Very nice use of color and tones. Really like the concept and the crop on this one. At first, I found myself looking for a bluer sky other than just the whiteness, howevr, after looking at it a few times, I think that it is part of what makes the it al;l come together. |
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04/29/2006 08:02:13 AM |
| I would have want to see straight-on photo. Taken to much from the right |
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04/29/2006 02:47:14 AM |
| This has lots of potential. It seems like you should have waited to much later (or earlier) in the day to shoot this in order to get a more dynamic sky or at least one that is not so easily blown out. |
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04/28/2006 10:05:40 PM |
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04/28/2006 04:42:47 PM |
| INteresting viewpoint and interesting framing. |
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