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05/04/2006 04:56:31 PM |
| i did got some comments saying the lighting was a bit funny, this could be because there is no roof on the building and there was quite bright sunlight hitting the wall? |
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05/03/2006 11:47:54 PM |
*Critique Club*
"Hardwick Old Hall, Derbyshire" is a nice addition into the Window Framed challenge. I have to say congratulations on a new personal best, that is always a wonderful thing to see after the challenge ends.
The photograph itself is very interesting and did grab my attention. I think the image grabbed more of my attention because you left more of the surrounding frame in the shot unlike many of the other entries. I love the rustic appeal with the broken covering on the right-hand side. The composition is very nice. The subject framed looks so prefect it almost looks unreal. Like Konador said there is some halo on the blue in the frame that is showing up, but for me it was pretty minimal. Overall great work! |
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04/30/2006 10:47:45 PM |
| Great feeling of age and beauty. |
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04/30/2006 09:04:13 PM |
| Nice but the view through the window looks odd, like you processed it diffrently than the wall, the lighting doesn´t seem right somehow. |
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04/30/2006 08:51:23 PM |
| i think this needs a major subject, not just the landscape |
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04/30/2006 03:59:43 PM |
| nice light and shadow, great exposure. GL pretty and techly. well done |
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04/30/2006 12:56:14 PM |
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04/29/2006 09:18:04 PM |
| great old building and beautiful view |
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04/29/2006 06:47:13 PM |
| Great light perfect frame for the scene. |
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04/29/2006 04:20:28 PM |
| soft light. serene countryside. Good formula for a high scoring shot. - 7 |
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04/29/2006 03:42:51 PM |
| Almost looks painted. Nice. |
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04/29/2006 11:00:42 AM |
| I think the radius you used (in USM) was too high, since I can see haloing around the window frames. If you don't understand USM I have a free tutorial video available about it at my website which could help. |
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04/29/2006 10:40:44 AM |
| Beautiful old window which is framing a even more beautiful piece of country side. Well done and good luck here! 9 |
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04/29/2006 09:02:50 AM |
| Woa, easy on the shadow and highlight adjustments! |
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04/29/2006 08:24:11 AM |
| Wow great view you got there! |
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04/28/2006 04:36:21 PM |
| I'm guessing you used "Shadow/Highlight" on this one. Nice composition. You might try adding more mid-tone contrast to take a little of the "flatness" out of the image. |
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04/28/2006 06:37:00 AM |
| Nice idea ,good image alltho colors seem a bit unatural expecialy the sky overall 7 |
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04/27/2006 07:10:36 AM |
| this is fantastic...hope it does well for you |
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04/25/2006 09:02:27 PM |
| A unique window with a nice view. It would look better without the rail accross the bottom, but i'm sure your couldnt help that unless you wanted to remodel the building!! 8 |
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04/25/2006 01:43:38 PM |
| Beautiful textures and lighting, the scene through the window is lovely too. |
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04/25/2006 12:02:51 AM |
| I like the idea, but I wish the picture was positioned better and the view was clearer. |
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04/24/2006 10:23:34 PM |
| It's a window and it's framing a view and that's about all I see here. It's a lovely view, very beautiful country and the use of the old style window is very nice but it's really bland overall. No depth, no contrast, no life in the shot. Perhaps a curves adjustment, maybe a little dodging or burning to add more to the shot itself? The light is a bit harsh also, a levels adjustment to possibly soften that up a bit? I think this shot has great potential with a little bit more editing and maybe even a little more cropping, take some off the left and bring it more to a rule of thirds instead of so centered. A 6 |
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04/24/2006 11:31:22 AM |
| Lovely colours and what a beautiful window!! |
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