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04/22/2006 09:42:24 PMPost actions
ok.shadow on cheek and some burnt highlights are disturbing
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04/21/2006 10:59:49 PMPost actions
She has a great expression, but the large shadow line on her cheek detracts somewhat.
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04/19/2006 01:38:49 PMPost actions
The shawl seems more in focus than the eyes. Cute little model and I like the expression.
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04/19/2006 07:26:47 AMPost actions
just a bit soft. Colors and lighting look good.
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04/18/2006 04:09:27 PMPost actions
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04/17/2006 12:07:04 PMPost actions
One more light from another angle to get rid of the shadow on her face would have been nice. Perhaps a tad sharper as well. Still, nice job.
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04/17/2006 08:59:27 AMPost actions
Nice photograph, good pose and subject. The only thing that is a little distracting is the shadow on her left cheek, as it tends to draw the eye. Perhaps a fill would have helped.
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