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05/01/2006 11:59:51 PM |
Greetings from the Critique Club!
First, let me say that I am not a professional or even a very good amature photographer, so you may want to take my comments with a grain of salt.
I have mixed feelings about this. I would not have been able to recognize what this was had I not read your comments. I think it would have been much better if you had incorporated "Drive-In" into your title so that people would not have to struggle so hard with it.
Composition-wise I feel that this is decent but maybe could have benefited from a little context to show that the speakers are not the same size and location as the white screen. If I look at the pic from a bit of a distance that is what it seems like.
This being said, I really love the blurry/grainy/whatever effect that you have. It makes me feel like I am looking back in time - which of course adds to the old feeling.
I feel like this is a photo with a lot of potential. Like you had a great vision that you captured almost, but not exactly, perfectly, or you failed to include just the bit of context or focus that other viewers would need to see the scene as you saw it. I do love what you were trying to do here and I find your photo very pleasing to look at. |
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04/29/2006 08:09:09 AM |
there is a drive-in about a hour from me here in GA. I like the idea of the pictures but i am not sure what the black thing is. just not clear enough for me |
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04/23/2006 11:55:44 PM |
I think the focus should have been on the speakers. |
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04/23/2006 03:49:59 AM |
cannot make heads or tails out of this shot...it looks like a blurry who knows what... |
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04/22/2006 06:15:15 PM |
took me a while to figure out what |
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04/21/2006 11:28:14 PM |
lack of detail on speakers could loose younger voters.had me stumped and i am only 30something |
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04/21/2006 08:37:50 PM |
It took me awhile to figure out what this was.. the big black speaker looming in the foreground is very distracting because it is badly out of focus and yet takes up so much of the frame. I feel like I'm missing half the photo. |
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04/21/2006 07:57:47 PM |
I'm really struggling to see what this is. |
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04/21/2006 10:52:24 AM |
not sure what this is.. an old drive in movie? Took me a minute to figure out. The speaker in the front might look better in focus, with the screen slightly out behind them? |
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04/21/2006 12:32:04 AM |
What exactly am I looking at? All I see is a noisy, poorly-focused, uninteresting image that bears little resemblance to anything that belongs in this challenge. |
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04/20/2006 10:35:50 PM |
Took me several seconds to figure out what this is. I think it would be much more dramatic if the focus was on the speakers and not the screen. |
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04/20/2006 09:17:37 PM |
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04/20/2006 01:36:45 PM |
Not sure what I am looking at. Dark item in front is not in focus, overall image is grainy. |
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04/19/2006 09:15:57 PM |
what is the subject? what am I looking at? the noise level of the image is FAR too bad. the noise truly distracts from the photo. |
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04/19/2006 04:27:27 PM |
I dont know what I'm looking at? |
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04/19/2006 08:04:35 AM |
Sorry, can't see what this is meant to be. |
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04/19/2006 04:56:16 AM |
Which is the subject - the blurred black "thing" or the blank white... billboard, is it? |
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