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04/29/2006 01:47:22 PM |
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::
Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.
First Impression - the most important one:
Intersting shot. Definitely has a "studio" feel to it. Good use of light.
Composition:
It works and it works well. It's interesting and places points of interest in strong places.
Subject:
Hard to miss the subject. He (you) does stand out well from the background and composition brings my eye to your face.
Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color and focus are both good.
Light: Lighting overall in this image is interesting with nice highlights and shadows. The one issue I have is the light fall-off on the background beneath the arm pit. You are losing the grey background that would help define the area more.
To grow its vote?:
Hot chick or cute child seems to work around here. :-) You did a fine entry in a tough challenge.
Summary:
Good work overall. Keep at it :-)
Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy |
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Comments Made During the Challenge  |
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04/21/2006 05:10:20 AM |
| Nice and sharp and I like the lighting. Good job. |
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 Photographer found comment helpful. |
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04/20/2006 03:59:14 PM |
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04/18/2006 08:08:27 AM |
| "WOW".....What a body..... |
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