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04/30/2006 09:07:28 PMPost actions
Hi There
Kari from the critique club,
Sorry to have taken so long to complete this critique ... but I have a few things that might help in future.
First impression:
Gorgeous - going for the cute shot is a good thing in the portrait challenge. and this one is oh so cute.
Theme
Meets the challenge and does so with gusto.
Technical
Good crisp shot with good DOF. The background is far enough back for no shadows and complements and not overtakes the fact that this little one is in pink. My only issue is the one bought up in your comments and that is the top space. However, I would not centre the baby I don't think that would have added anything, I would have allowed slightly more on the left ... not enough to centre just enough to balance her. (take it that this is a girl child)
Scoring better:
I gave this a nine ... it was a good solid shot with beautiful things to complement ... I think take note of what the commentators say and work more on your mind reading skills.
Finally:
If you have any questions feel free to PM me.
Kari
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04/29/2006 01:17:49 PMPost actions
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Comments Made During the Challenge
04/23/2006 11:48:22 PMPost actions
I don't think the space up top adds to the shot in any way. I'd just crop it down and have the baby centered.
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04/23/2006 10:29:14 PMPost actions
too pink! a different background would have set this munchkin off!
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04/23/2006 04:35:09 AMPost actions
Lots of good children portraits and this is one of them. I like everything about this.
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04/21/2006 11:04:44 PMPost actions
That's adorable. Great expression here and the background is lovely. A very well done portrait.
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04/21/2006 01:59:42 PMPost actions
That's a great look! Did you do the "peek-a-boo" thing to get it? Good stuff. :o)
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04/20/2006 10:38:39 PMPost actions
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04/20/2006 12:04:30 AMPost actions
amazingly adorable.
good choice of colours for a backdrop and clothings.
Very nicely done. good job.
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04/19/2006 06:32:25 PMPost actions
Cute as they come. Great background, light and focus.
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04/19/2006 05:43:38 AMPost actions
Terrific! the background, the foreground..everything
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04/18/2006 03:58:19 PMPost actions
That is realy cute. Love the idea, crop & colours. Catchlight in the eyes works well.
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04/18/2006 03:02:03 PMPost actions
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04/18/2006 01:13:42 PMPost actions
My only 10 - just adorable! Well done!
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04/17/2006 05:38:50 PMPost actions
super cute! an 8 from me.
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04/17/2006 08:38:34 AMPost actions
Aw, really nice capture :]
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04/17/2006 07:54:21 AMPost actions
Made me laugh, I bet you both had stacks of fun during this photo shot.
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04/17/2006 07:11:53 AMPost actions
Fantastic! Great colurs and fantastic pose. Well done, hope you do well with this...
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04/17/2006 03:29:04 AMPost actions
Awww - she's just too cute. 8 from me
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04/17/2006 02:01:03 AMPost actions
Awwww what a pretty pink bunny!
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04/17/2006 01:29:52 AMPost actions
Love this image so much, especially the soft pink colors.....
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04/17/2006 12:49:40 AMPost actions
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