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Challenge: Candid III (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Fujifilm FinePix S7000
Location: Medway, Ohio
Date: Apr 8, 2006
Date Uploaded: Apr 10, 2006

 This is my very first submission ever! I hope that people like this picture!

Statistics
Place: 227 out of 396
Avg (all users): 5.0429
Avg (commenters): 5.6000
Avg (participants): 4.9717
Avg (non-participants): 5.1024
Views since voting: 741
Views during voting: 315
Votes: 233
Comments: 6
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 04/19/2006 10:47:54 AM
Congratulations on your first entry! You even did better than me on your first entry than I did on mine! I would definitely echo what was said about making the crop a little bit tighter to emphasize the embrace. There's just a tadd too much negative space on the bottom and detracts the eye from the intended subject and causes he ye to wander a bit. I realize that the S7000 uses a 4:3 ratio crop. With this shot I probably would have usd the traditional 3:2 ratio and cut off a little bit of the bottom. I think it might have helped to get a little more of the brides head in there, that may have also put the hands at one of the Rule of 3rds intersections. Hope that helps! Looking good! I look forward to your future entries.
 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/15/2006 09:24:02 PM
I am a wedding photographer and I usualy have the couple posed for shots like this. Good shot though. I also use the same pose.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 04/14/2006 11:55:47 PM
wooooooooooooowee
 04/14/2006 09:29:31 PM
I'd cut 1/3 of the bottom, it brings the embrace more into the eyes of the viewer.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 04/14/2006 06:43:59 PM
Wonderful, the way the hands stand out on his back with the ring on her finger. Very good.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 04/12/2006 05:42:49 PM
I'm not much for receiving or giving comments, but since Candids are near and dear to my heart, I have decided to give comment on every entry in this challenge.

Would have made a nice "hands" challenge shot, but I don't see candid here to me. I understand the imaginative concept in that of the candid you are portraying, but to me personally, I like to see straight-on emotional moments in, preferably, the face or situation. Here I just see that I have to imagine it rather than see it, and in that, I give this photo a 4.


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