Nice moment and colors. Branches in front have ruined your composition and focus. Clear view without branches and focus on faces would be better. Also please loose the angle, you already have an interesting arrangement of the kids at different vertical levels.
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Children are far too easy to capture in a candid. They are willing to not hold back emotion or do obscure things. They are fun to learn about candid shooting, but for me, I look for something more obscure, extra ordinary, and/or that sparks a stimulating interest in a candid. For me this is also out of focus and not very well done technically. More attention to sharpness would have been a bit better. I think the branches may have caused that, as it tends to cause the focus to wonder in the camera. It'a a 3 for me.
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