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04/25/2006 01:48:59 PM |
Hello from the Critique Club!
My first impression is that the background really steals the attention from the subject. Since the background is the only real source of color, and it is very high contrast, it prevents your eye from resting comfortably on the subject. This may have worked better with a solid color background, maybe black. This would force your eye back on to the subject.
The lighting also seems a bit soft. It appears to me that there may be two light sources. One above the subject (the bedside lamp?), and the second across the room from the subject (maybe a window?). Neither light source is very dramatic. A single bright light that would create some interesting reflections on the metal would add some punch to this photo. This would also sharpen the picture more.
One other thing to consider is using the full file size available to you. This picture is only 82k. You are allowed up to 150k. That extra resolution can do nothing but help. It allows for more detail in your picture, and in this case may increase the sharpness some!
-Bill |
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04/18/2006 12:11:02 PM |
| i like it but im not sure about the rainbow colours |
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04/18/2006 12:04:35 PM |
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04/18/2006 09:28:37 AM |
| Lol, is this a homage to the Easter bunny? |
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04/17/2006 09:07:01 PM |
| looks to busy. nice idea though |
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04/17/2006 07:36:28 PM |
| A bit too busy. The background is really pretty, but distracts from the main subject. Still, unique take on the challenge. |
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04/15/2006 10:19:00 AM |
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04/14/2006 02:40:00 AM |
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04/13/2006 03:08:45 PM |
| Very creative subject choice! |
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04/13/2006 11:46:51 AM |
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04/13/2006 09:35:40 AM |
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04/12/2006 07:33:45 PM |
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04/12/2006 08:54:31 AM |
| Can't work this one out... |
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