|Will be giving you "honest" critiques. As such they are meant to be constructive but may be harsh.
This one, will be kinda harsh...
I'd consider discard this one...here's why
- face / head position, to strained, poor expression on face
- the breasts are way over-exposed
- the pose is kinda odd, and almost makes her look pop-belly, and yes she's a think model.
- composition forces rotation and makes for a weird angle feeling
What is good:
- the color is nice, I think the tones and saturation could be heigtened for a touch of surreal even
Sorry, this one missed the boat a lot for me. That said....this is meant to be constructive. So although I am being critical, I don't mean any slight by it.