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04/04/2006 09:06:38 PM |
| bad pose (too straight on, odd head angle compared to body, feet positioned badly, weight on wrong leg), belly...a bit too centered. |
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04/03/2006 02:13:32 PM |
I really like this background. The colors are great and add interest to the shot. I like the crop and tilt too. I'm not enthusiastic about her pose here. I can visualize this shot with her leaning back against the bricks, arms crossed comfortably, head tilted down and to her left but eyes looking back up into the camera and smirking. Maybe even just looking down at the ground with no particular expression.
(edit) Just noticed one more small thing. In several shots, her bra looks very rigid and makes some very unnatural lumps and shadows.
Message edited by author 2006-04-03 14:15:48. |
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04/03/2006 01:36:12 PM |
Will be giving you "honest" critiques. As such they are meant to be constructive but may be harsh.
This one, will be kinda harsh...
I'd consider discard this one...here's why
- face / head position, to strained, poor expression on face
- the breasts are way over-exposed
- the pose is kinda odd, and almost makes her look pop-belly, and yes she's a think model.
- composition forces rotation and makes for a weird angle feeling
What is good:
- the color is nice, I think the tones and saturation could be heigtened for a touch of surreal even
Sorry, this one missed the boat a lot for me. That said....this is meant to be constructive. So although I am being critical, I don't mean any slight by it.
- Saj |
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