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First off i have to say thank you for entering the challenge, that what keeps dpc going.
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first of all i like you photo, it seems like you had a great idea,
things i notice,
to me it doesnt seem in focus, not that its not in focus, i see the focus point twoards the bottom chalk piece, which leaves the rest kinda not sharp.
I think a black background would have escentuated the color better, and you could have up the colors thru hue/saturation
over all i think this is a good photo it would have scored better if the color was more vibrand and it was a little sharper
Great shot, keep shooting. |