Bad lighting on the nose - only the tip is lit and the bridge has a shadow on it. The eyes are level - tilt the head a bit and it'll look better. a refelctor to the models right would have opened up the face a bit, or some fill flash maybe.
body position, turn of the head, the hands are all ok. i might like to see a tighter crop - show no white wall, but off center of this is good |
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