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Yellow Attack!
Yellow Attack!
Penny Lane


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Yellow III (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Canon PowerShot A300
Location: The Park
Date: Mar 28, 2006
Aperture: F5.6
ISO: auto
Shutter: 1/807sec
Galleries: Humorous, Portraiture
Date Uploaded: Mar 28, 2006

 cropped, rotated to an angle, upped the sat slightly, small amount of dodge and burn, cloned out tip of tree in bottom left corner.
Was suposed to be a pretty spring shot, my 9 year old son however wasn't very good at tossing the flowers gently into the air above his sister's head. Although this one isn't what I was aiming for I still really like it. LOL

Statistics
Place: 353 out of 404
Avg (all users): 4.5059
Avg (commenters): 5.6667
Avg (participants): 4.4454
Avg (non-participants): 4.6471
Views since voting: 1019
Views during voting: 240
Votes: 170
Comments: 8
Favorites: 0

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 04/10/2006 08:06:46 PM
I agree with the comments below, the photo is not sharp.

I also ask why? She is falling backwards but why, you know but its not in the photo to explain to the viewer.

I suffer this alot. I view my images thinking about where I was and what I was doing rather than looking at it as an individual scene.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 04/10/2006 07:32:32 PM
I agree with Larus. Even without the "story" this probably would have scored at least a full point higher if it was tack sharp.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 04/10/2006 07:10:31 PM
bit soft
lack of context(camera tilt /person falling backwards ?)

and (IMO) what really hurts it is the closed eyes ...
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 04/10/2006 07:10:10 PM
For starters, it would have scored much better if it were in focus, I can´t imagine there being motion blur since it´s at 1/800 of a second. Also the shot doesn´t connect with me, I don´t get what is going on, needs a backround or something to show the environment. What I mean is, is she slipping, is she jumping up in the air, is someone throwing the flowers at her, you can´t really make any of that out from viewing the shot. I know that comes from the title but it shouldn´t have to, the shot should tell the whole story.

Hope this helps :)
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 04/10/2006 12:38:45 AM
I enjoy this one, and think it should have done better!
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/07/2006 07:55:58 PM
Hmm... The motion blur or focus softness here detracts from the image imho. The overall pose looks very forced and unnatural to me (she may not be a great actress = ). The colors and exposure are nice though.
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 04/07/2006 11:47:27 AM
Cute!
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 04/03/2006 08:40:28 PM
Nice action shot.
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