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03/28/2006 10:28:32 PM |
Strong contender for the brown here. Nothing is in focus and the little triangle is very distracting. |
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03/27/2006 11:05:07 PM |
Did you intend for the shot to be out of focus? If so, I don't appreciate the effect. If not, you messed up. |
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03/26/2006 10:35:50 PM |
Sorry, but your focus is off. Also the bright object at bottom right of the pic is distracting.
The idea here is OK, but you need to get the focus better. |
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03/26/2006 04:10:25 PM |
I would find it more interesting if it was sharper and perhaps off centered. |
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03/26/2006 12:09:34 PM |
I love the colors. The soft focus is almost offset by the colors, but not quite. |
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03/25/2006 07:43:52 AM |
The idea is there but the photo is way out of focus and over exposed. |
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03/24/2006 04:44:45 PM |
Out of focus and slightly blown, with uncomplementary grain and jpg artefacting, plus a too-diffuse background that seems to be necessary for the composition. Please try again next time. |
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03/24/2006 04:42:14 PM |
Sometimes I think it's my glasses, but this one looks out of focus. |
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03/24/2006 03:00:32 PM |
nice idea, but the focus and the light peeping around the hand really pull you down. if you don't have macro, shoot from further away and then crop in. |
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03/24/2006 01:30:50 PM |
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03/24/2006 12:33:22 PM |
Blurry. Who's in the background. Too distracted. |
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03/23/2006 03:59:53 PM |
Welcome to DPC. Looks like back-focus, as evident from the sharp lamp. Focus on hands and less-central compostion would be better. It's possible that your camera can't focus this closely, if so, back it up and crop in software. |
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03/23/2006 03:22:08 PM |
I think this should be more in focus. |
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03/23/2006 03:03:04 PM |
Out of focus and the light at the back of the right hand is distracting. |
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03/23/2006 02:05:29 PM |
I don't like that the hands are so out of focus... the only thing that seems to be in focus is something that is peeking out from behind the hands... |
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03/23/2006 12:48:51 PM |
I think it would have helped to have better focus and the crop a little higher. |
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03/23/2006 06:40:33 AM |
I understand what you were attempting to accomplish but this composition feels slightly rushed. I believe the hands do need to have some point of focus. It goes beyond selective focus. Also, the light in the background is distracting to me. There seems to be a large amount of noise in this photograph. Nice attempt but I feel that it’s not quite there. |
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03/23/2006 12:30:17 AM |
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03/22/2006 06:33:11 PM |
a macro lens would help with focus on this one. |
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03/22/2006 05:37:15 PM |
this is blurry enough to be distracting. |
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03/22/2006 03:59:59 PM |
really bad on many levels - a 2 for meeting the challenge topic |
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03/22/2006 03:48:03 AM |
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03/22/2006 12:50:46 AM |
Very blurry. I would have liked to have seen the hands sharp. |
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