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Original 7.557.  Imitation 3.555.  In joebar's pocket : 4.002
Original 7.557. Imitation 3.555. In joebar's pocket : 4.002
kashi


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Deja Vu II (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Canon PowerShot A85
Location: At home
Date: Mar 21, 2006
Aperture: 3.51
ISO: AUTO
Shutter: 1/60s
Galleries: Snapshot, Macro
Date Uploaded: Mar 21, 2006

crop & resize
contrast
gausion blur to background
darkened face
Neat Image
USM
cross fingers

Statistics
Place: 140 out of 141
Avg (all users): 3.8571
Avg (commenters): 3.6667
Avg (participants): 3.8765
Avg (non-participants): 3.8426
Views since voting: 1229
Views during voting: 269
Votes: 189
Comments: 17
Favorites: 1 (view)


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03/31/2006 05:29:12 AM
Well, I called that one - last place.

Ah well - no place to go but up from here !

Thank you beaflies, and everyone who commented during the challenge. I have to work on my close-up focus, but I'm not sure how yet.
03/31/2006 04:32:44 AM
What jwillerton said. You asked on the forum if someone would tell you what you did wrong? IMHO: I learned the hard way with one of my first entries that focus is the one element you cannot do without here. You can be off on the color, exposure, or composition and not be scored down near as much as having poor focus. Probably because the others can be subject to interpretation, but the center of your subject (like the eyes of your child or face of your watch) must be crisp. I hope that helps. Don't be discouraged, there is so much for all of us to learn and this is a really awesome place full of really helpful people and tools! I know I've come a long way in my time here. Patience and a bit of thick skin helps! Good luck and happy picture trails :)
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/30/2006 08:55:33 PM
Wish the focus were sharper.
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03/30/2006 08:01:38 PM
A bit out of focus keeps me from giving a higher score.
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03/26/2006 02:15:15 PM
bit more focus would be great!
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03/26/2006 09:16:50 AM
I think this would have been more effective if the face of the watch were in focus.
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03/25/2006 09:51:12 PM
I'm sure you're getting a lot of comments that your photo is not in focus. Shame.
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03/24/2006 10:15:45 PM
Focus needs some work, placement in frame is nice.
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03/24/2006 08:01:15 PM
I would like to see the watch face in focus. Otherwise, good lighting and good expsore. The watch is also positioned well, slightly diagonal. The shadows behind the watch are a little distracting and should have been taken out or by cloning or making the whole top portion of the image the darker blue.
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03/24/2006 10:38:42 AM
I'll give you an extra point for a good title...
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03/24/2006 10:29:41 AM
I was going to try this shot also, but when I saw how the lighting was done I moved on. My biggest problem with your shot is that the focus is on the back of the band instead of the face.
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03/24/2006 10:01:56 AM
This shot looks too soft to me.
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03/24/2006 03:58:51 AM
Sorry but shots like this need to be pristine and sharp to work and this isnĀ“t even close so I threw you a 4.
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03/24/2006 02:45:13 AM
Don't recall seeing the original. Am I missing something creative here or is this simply OOF?
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03/24/2006 01:54:35 AM
??? an out of focus watch???
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03/24/2006 01:00:22 AM
If it's a parody, I can't tell, wish the face was in focus instead of the back
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03/24/2006 12:11:33 AM
It would probably score higher if the focus was sharp on the face with good DOF.
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