Greetings from the Critique Club :-)
Hmmm, not sure what kind of critique I can give you on this shot. To me, it is actually a great tribute shot of the totally awesome original by graphicfunk. I think you did a very nice job on the shot. Far better than I could of done :-) , and probably far better than most folks could of done. It is most definitely very readily and quickly recognised as a tribute to 'Wading into Eternity'. The clarity of your hands and arms is great. The exposures look pretty good. Maybe just a touch hot on the top set of arms, but just minorly so. I think the image works well in b/w. I agree with the comment that Dan's original has the edge on lighting, and a slightly stronger composition. I think if you could of got a little better positioning of the arms, in relation to the body, it quite possibly could of bumped your score up. Still, 6.28 is not bad at all. A very fine tribute and great entry for this challenge. I agree with graphicfunk, this show's a great grasp of technique, come up with some concepts and show us what ya got! :-)
Sorry I couldn't muster up a better critique for you. If you have any questions or comments or anything, please feel free to contact me.
Happy shooting,
taterbug :-) |
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