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Running Water  --  Homage to karmat
Running Water -- Homage to karmat
AChelton


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Challenge: Deja Vu II (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Nikon D70
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 18-70mm f/3.5-4.5G IF-ED
Location: DeSoto Falls, GA
Date: Mar 18, 2006
Aperture: f29
ISO: 200
Shutter: 2 sec
Galleries: Landscape, Water
Date Uploaded: Mar 19, 2006

Yeah I know, its at the same waterfall as my "2 Second Exposure" shot, but its such a nice spot I had to use it.

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Place: 83 out of 141
Avg (all users): 5.9412
Avg (commenters): 6.8000
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Views since voting: 1020
Views during voting: 306
Votes: 204
Comments: 8
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04/05/2006 10:47:58 PM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Your photo is an excellent example of a classic subject. Composition is good, leading the eye via the perfectly exposed falls from the broad foreground, up through an almost "S" shape created by the water, to the finer details at the head of the falls and the dark areas beyond. Detailed textures in the reflections on top of the rocks offset the smooth water well; the interpolation of the shadows created by the rocks form satisfying shapes against the highlights. Overall exposure and evenness of tone is well done.

My only comment regarding improvement may have been to remove the large log at left before taking the exposure. For me, this is an eye trap, since it's so different in texture and tone from the water and rocks while not offering a satisfying contrast. It could be argued, however, that the line created by the log follows the edge of the falls well, and acts as draw rather than a "catch". The leaves in the upper right also slightly detract for me. Perhaps a crop closer to the top of the falls may have improved composition.

However, overall, this is an excellent shot, and a very pleasing scene. Congratulations!

Hope this helps,
Louis
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/29/2006 02:34:09 PM
cool. 'cept yours is better! :)
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03/26/2006 02:16:36 PM
love the mystical water!
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03/26/2006 06:37:54 AM
magic waterfall.....
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03/24/2006 06:03:38 PM
Outstanding entry... great job... :)
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03/24/2006 02:41:57 PM
Absolutely Marvelous!!! ^.~
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03/24/2006 02:13:57 AM
Very pretty. It looks almost like an optical illusion somehow, near the top of the falls. Nicely shot.
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03/24/2006 02:03:05 AM
very nice...great shot...like the lighting here
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