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04/02/2006 12:11:42 AM |
* Greetings from the Critique Club *
Hello Kita. My first impression of looking at this photo is that I think your choice of subject really cost you here. As per some of your comments you received, it's not very interesting to look at and a lot of people obviously felt that way.
There's not too much in the silhouette to catch someones attention. Maybe having been closer to the power pole and bringing that as the main focal point may of helped reshape the image and add that bit of life to it that it's calling out for.
The cloud pattern is probably the main attraction in the image. Its a nice formation across most of the sky. Perhaps if you had tried cropping so that the bright light is in the top left corner instead of the middle of the photo, therefore highlighting that main formation across the whole top of the image as the cloud in the top left is a little broken up.
Colour colour colour! I feel it really needs more colour across the sky to help bring it all out. Perhaps the time of day and exposure limited this slightly.
You have had some wonderful entries in your short time here on DPC and some scores that make my entries look pretty sad. Although this was probably not one of your better photos I'm sure you would of learnt a lot from it and that is what makes us better. Well done and best of luck with your future entries! I'm sure within time you'll have a nice collection of ribbons to rival your mum's.
Neil |
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03/23/2006 04:10:04 PM |
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03/21/2006 09:38:59 AM |
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03/21/2006 12:51:41 AM |
| Interesting clouds but not enough else to hold my attention. |
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03/20/2006 07:52:05 AM |
| This picture doesn't do much for me, the landscape silhouette isn't very interesting and the clouds not particularly nice or nicely coloured. |
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