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03/24/2006 02:41:13 AM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Love the de-sat (can't often say that) ... and the smile on her face ... she may have been nervous but she did well.
Composition:
I liked this ... you have the bottom rails on thirds which is nice ... having it with her a little further into the shot may have created a leaving something as well as a going somewhere impression.
Subject:
Crikey this meets the challenge and does it good.
Technical (Colour and light):
I really think that this look works well for this picture.
To grow its vote?:
as mentioned above ... that is all i can think of.
Summary:
I think thsi is really lovely .. and I hope you looked after your model after she fell off.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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03/19/2006 01:29:47 PM |
Originally posted by Hawkeye:
Interesting subject. It looks like she is super nervous - hasn't been on a bike for a while? Quite a challenge in high heels! |
She was very nervous- she fell off the bike a few times. :-) |
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03/18/2006 11:55:26 PM |
My number one pick for this pick two.
Rating = 10 |
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03/17/2006 11:51:14 AM |
| Nice composition. Partial sepia coloring leaves colors feeling muddy. Would probably be better either with bright colors (especially to fit title) or else fully duotone sepia. |
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03/16/2006 09:10:54 PM |
| Very atmospheric. I like this. |
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03/15/2006 08:05:04 AM |
| Love the soft tones in this image..... |
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03/15/2006 03:15:59 AM |
| This is very nicely done. A great respite from the average shot found in this challenge. Great job! 10 |
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03/15/2006 01:16:32 AM |
| Interesting subject. It looks like she is super nervous - hasn't been on a bike for a while? Quite a challenge in high heels! |
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03/14/2006 09:59:53 PM |
| I like the composition but I'd like to see more color, especially on the bike itself. |
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03/13/2006 09:34:36 PM |
| nice softened color, really slows the pace, almost looks painted. very nice |
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03/12/2006 09:26:09 PM |
| Nicely done. I like the tone. |
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03/12/2006 03:04:35 PM |
| I like the soft, desaturated color. The composition works nicely. You made good use of two of the objects to create an image that actually makes some sense and works outside the boundaries of the challenge. My only beef is that there is an odd static look to the woman on the bike and I would like it if her hair were pulled back so we can see her face. Her hair blends into the background too much. Also, this is really picky, I know, but I wish she had taken off her bracelets and watch. I would like to see the curved line of her arms unimpeded. All the bracelets in close conjection to the handlebars give a choppy, cluttered look to that area. |
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03/12/2006 02:13:56 PM |
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03/12/2006 10:43:22 AM |
| This is the most natural of all the entries. The hint of pink works. I'm wondering if maybe the background being a bit lighter might've worked better. Possily some dodge on the trees? Nice off centered placement of the subject. I wish we could see a bit more of her face. 7 |
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03/12/2006 07:18:08 AM |
| A good sense of nostalgia. |
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03/12/2006 02:59:50 AM |
| the pink heels make it, good job! |
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03/12/2006 01:17:39 AM |
| Love the post process on this. |
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03/12/2006 01:00:33 AM |
| this has a feeling of nostalgia I like it 10 |
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03/12/2006 12:20:01 AM |
| Like the color tone of this. Very nice, simple composition. |
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