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03/24/2006 02:07:38 AM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
Just a note when I do a critique, I go past just the photographic result, that's what voters comments do. The critique looks at what you were trying to achieve, how you wanted it to look and what issues you had in getting the image captured and ready for voting - somtimes it is nice for these details also to be included in the photographers comments.
First Impression - the most important one:
Using what you got did you good!
Composition:
I really like this composition - It has really strong lines .. and good colours in it.
Subject:
Only partially meets the challenge - bi-focals I am not sure these are ... this has been reised by others who commented and may have affected your score - although not greatly I think .. but just a small details helps to improve things.
Technical (Colour and light):
I really like the lighting and the colour is fantastic ... this is a sexy shot!
To grow its vote?:
Using the right stuff (if these are I apologise) - a little rotation may have have helped ... I think to the left .. to make the shot standing not look like it is on an angle.
Summary:
Great shot ... good shooting.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari
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03/14/2006 04:21:47 PM |
| Like the composition and colour. |
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03/13/2006 03:18:25 PM |
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03/12/2006 07:18:52 AM |
| I like the lines and the simplicity. Well done. |
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03/12/2006 05:33:47 AM |
| good lighting and a nice clear shot |
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03/12/2006 03:45:18 AM |
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03/12/2006 12:41:27 AM |
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03/12/2006 12:25:03 AM |
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03/12/2006 12:24:35 AM |
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03/12/2006 12:20:34 AM |
| I'd clone out the words in the shoes. Nice lighting. |
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