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Shades of White
Shades of White
AndrewTO


Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Square Crop (Advanced Editing IV)
Collection: Challenges
Camera: Canon EOS-20D
Lens: Canon EF-S 17-85mm f/4-5.6 IS USM
Location: Bexhill
Date: Mar 4, 2006
Aperture: f/10
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/200 s.
Galleries: Abstract, Architecture
Date Uploaded: Mar 4, 2006

Shot at the famous Delaware Pavillion in Bexhill-on-sea, UK, on a crsip, sunny day. I like the shapes and lighting.

Post-processing: crop, levels, contrast, cleaned a few dirty spots, resize, Neat Image, USM, framed.

Statistics
Place: 109 out of 369
Avg (all users): 5.8152
Avg (commenters): 7.4000
Avg (participants): 5.7015
Avg (non-participants): 6.0130
Views since voting: 784
Views during voting: 308
Votes: 211
Comments: 14
Favorites: 1 (view)


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03/15/2006 06:48:23 PM
::: Greetings from Critique Club :::

Hi, as requested, here is an indepth critique of your submission.

First Impression - the most important one:
Nice texture and lighting. Very well exposed.

Composition:
Composition isn't this photos strongest point. The choice of crop feels a bit crowded for my tastes.

Subject:
Discussing subject is sorta pointless for this photo as the texture and shapes of the "columns" are more the subject than the colums themselves I feel. That said, you did well at emphasizing the shape and texture.

Technical (Color, focus, and light):
Color: natural and well balanced.
Focus, sharp as a tack as far as I can tell.
Light, excellent.

To grow its vote?:
Tough challenge, but I feel the crowded composition may have hurt you some. And for many this photo probably didn't provide much "wow". DPC voters love some sort of wow factor.

Summary:
Very nice light study. I really like your choice of angle to capture the lighting.

Hope to see more from you soon,
Leroy
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03/13/2006 10:22:05 AM
Cool shot. Excellent lighting and great eye. I love photographing things like this.
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03/13/2006 07:55:59 AM
very interesting lines and light
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
03/11/2006 03:41:52 AM
Great image, nice lighting, a real play on the eyes.
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03/10/2006 12:21:48 PM
very nice. subtle and elegant.
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03/09/2006 04:32:13 PM
This is the most beaituful image I have seen in weeks - What an amazing eye you have... stunning!
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03/08/2006 04:42:50 PM
interesting shapes and lighting
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03/07/2006 09:26:26 PM
Works well in square crop; nice study.
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03/07/2006 04:15:28 PM
Almost looks like a line of pregnant women. Very graceful curves. I like the pattern and DOF. Nice the way the light plays here making the highlights and shadows bring out the curves.
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03/07/2006 09:53:20 AM
good use of pattern and natuarl light.
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03/06/2006 10:33:14 PM
Beautiful! Great detail.
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03/06/2006 04:57:20 PM
Great use of repeating pattern and the light filtering through is super cool. Excellent photo!
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03/06/2006 06:00:47 AM
Impressive symmetry!
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03/06/2006 01:00:49 AM
Gorgeous quasi-abstract! What a great image, and composition and exposure are perfect!
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