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08/02/2003 10:51:22 PM |
| Wow, she's so pretty, and such striking eyes. I like your choice of b/w. |
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07/30/2003 04:22:21 PM |
| Reflective mood. Empty space top left is a distraction. If you have more of the shot, you could rotate and re-crop to minimise this. |
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07/30/2003 01:20:44 PM |
| this has a nice feel to it, compostion is good, nice choice of b/w, well done |
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07/30/2003 01:55:07 AM |
| Nice shot, I really like the B&W here... However I would have cropped out the father's left shoulder. Hmm, now I look again, that would remove the nice white ribbon. :( |
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07/29/2003 03:09:29 PM |
| I love this shot. The darkness provides sort of a somber mood though - I'm not sure that's what you're going for here. The composition is perfect. |
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07/29/2003 03:04:34 AM |
| What I really like about this shot is the emotions which can be read off both faces. You have really captured the moment here very well. |
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07/29/2003 12:58:36 AM |
| Great shot! Nice capture...good subjects. |
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07/28/2003 05:15:26 PM |
| Beautiful girl! I like her dreamy expression. Nice work! ~8 |
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07/28/2003 12:44:48 PM |
| Good lighting, beautiful little girl and nice looking and longing in her eyes. |
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07/28/2003 08:06:34 AM |
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07/28/2003 07:45:19 AM |
Composition: I would be tempted to crop the white bow at the left, the child is a little too centralised. Nice position of the father though.
Technical: Nice focus, but the shadow under the girl's chin and ear is a bit harsh. I may have tried reducing contrast and increasing brightness slightly.
Meets challenge: A bit iffy..
Overall impression: Nice documentary shot, but for me cropping it on the left might be an improvement.
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