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My Neck Hurts
My Neck Hurts
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Duotones II (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Canon EOS-350D Rebel XT
Lens: Canon EF-S 18-55mm f/3.5-5.6
Location: Toronto, Ontario.
Date: Feb 18, 2006
Aperture: f/11
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/400
Galleries: Architecture, Black and White
Date Uploaded: Feb 21, 2006

Every big city has their pigeons. They're everywhere. Usually scrounging for food, or pooping on the architecture... this one lives in Toronto.

Beautiful sunny day with this gorgeous blue sky at 3pm, -13c with a wind chill factor -20c.

I really like this composition, but I got a stiff neck waiting for just one bird to fly between buildings.

Statistics
Place: 142 out of 631
Avg (all users): 5.6119
Avg (commenters): 6.9412
Avg (participants): 5.6220
Avg (non-participants): 5.5962
Views since voting: 851
Views during voting: 340
Votes: 268
Comments: 20
Favorites: 1 (view)


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03/02/2006 10:03:21 AM
Greetings from the Critique Club!

WHOA! For a second there I thought that was a person in the top of the shot! EEK!! :)

I can see why your neck would hurt, mine does and I'm not even standing there with you, you created a great shot that makes me feel like I'm standing there with you, waiting. Wonderful.

The shadows and tones are well done in this shot, the framing of the buildings, also well done. So you are probably asking, "Why did it only get a 5.576 then?"

Well, hard to say, to get into the minds of the voters is very hard indeed. I'm guessing the slightly off kilter of the top of the building on the left is part of the reason, if you had rotated just a bit so it was straight up and down might make a world of difference in this shot. If you do rotate and crop just a little differently I would love to see the result. I'm betting it will make a world of difference.

Hope my comments help.

Deannda
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03/01/2006 10:15:52 AM
Originally posted by ubique:

Hard to believe that the person capable of taking this thoughtful and beautiful photograph could also come up with such an awful title. But title aside, it's one of the most interesting images in the challenge. Very fine work. 7.


I appreciate your opinion. My original title was "Soaring High". Perhaps I should have used that instead. Is there a way I can change it. I am new to DPC?
Diana
 Comments Made During the Challenge
02/28/2006 11:01:07 PM
That bird really adds depth and scale to the shot as well as the lines that lead the eyes upward. Nice photo. Bumping up.
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02/28/2006 12:58:10 PM
Very cool shot!
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02/28/2006 11:37:55 AM
cool title and good composition!
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02/27/2006 09:41:17 PM
Love the perspective. Wouldlike to see the image rotated a little clockwise. Great detail.
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02/27/2006 10:19:40 AM
Good Shot! You need to get a Sony 717 or 828. Lens swivels and you won't hurt your neck!
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02/26/2006 07:59:01 PM
I love the shot with the clouds and shadows on the buildings. However, the bird(?) ruins the picture for me.
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02/26/2006 12:58:28 PM
Quite a stretch!
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02/24/2006 09:54:34 PM
Cool perspective. I also find the lighting very interesting.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
02/24/2006 01:10:00 AM
Nice shot!
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02/23/2006 07:56:55 PM
A very interesting composition and a point of view. I like those tones and lights/shadows. Good job!
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02/23/2006 05:45:48 AM
Hard to believe that the person capable of taking this thoughtful and beautiful photograph could also come up with such an awful title. But title aside, it's one of the most interesting images in the challenge. Very fine work. 7.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
02/22/2006 10:09:09 PM
when this 1st came up i was startled i though the bird was someone jumping. (terrible though i know)Now after looking at it i really like it. I like the way the 2nd building frames the shot
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02/22/2006 05:38:47 PM
nice use of super perspective
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02/22/2006 02:48:15 PM
interesting angle, but i think the composition would be better if you cropped a little off the bottom.
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02/22/2006 02:42:22 PM
very very nice - adding to faves.
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02/22/2006 11:28:59 AM
Yikes - at first it looked like a person jumping. I would have straightened based on the side of the building top left.
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02/22/2006 10:48:16 AM
lol..nice title
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02/22/2006 09:53:45 AM
great lines
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