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In a fashion shot, you need a focal point....what are you trying to "sell". The eyes? The necklace? The eye makeup is cool and you could make this more edgy had you concentrated on more on her eyes and didn't have the severe sideways glance happening. I could see this as a standing shot, shoulders rolled back or forward, facing into a fan blowing her hair back and the face 3/4 turned, over her shoulder. That would display the make-up and the necklace, even tho the makeup is enough. This, of course, is all MHO. |