I thought this was a pretty cool shot and definitely evokotive of the era in terms of the coloring and the processing. I only gave it a 5 though because it was too small to really evaluate and it borders on digital art.
I like where you were going with this photo, however, it won't score highly on DPC (I'm guessing). You haven't used the maximum image size that you're allowed to. It looks too processed and there is no real focus