Nice composition. Personally I think a little, pale shadow would be fine in the egg covers to break the continuousity of big white areas and DOF could be a little depper, to have the yellow middle sharp as well.
C'mon already. How many broken eggs are in this Challenge? I'm marking this down on principle...as broken just for this Challenge and not something "already broken". Cliche.
I figured out that those are broken eggs (good idea), but they need a little more shadow on the inside. On my monitor, they come across as white spaces. 5