*Critique Club*
"Would i?" is an extremely interesting piece in the abstract challenge, I had no idea exactly what it was. After reading your comments I can see the eye and get the title but during the challenge I completely miss it.
This is defiantly an abstract piece. It is almost haunting and enchanting at the same time trying to figure out the image. I am not quit sure what I would recommend because it is so unusual and I am sure you use the blur on purpose to enhance the subject. Maybe crop the image down and make it tighter for the subject to be the complete focus. Good out of the box thinking. |