::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
First Impression - the most important one:
Not often I get to critique something I commented on. :)
Composition:
I thought this was well composed with good use of DOF.
Subject:
Meets the challenge and is very off centred.
Technical (Colour and light):
Good lighting, good dof, maybe the cropping could have improved the shot and taken it from over average to better.
To grow its vote?:
I think that perhaps the cropping may have been the issue for some ... having the crop slightly wider on the left (looking at the screen) ... may have given a little more proportion.
Summary:
Great shot ... I like your model and use of her here.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari
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