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07/21/2003 10:43:08 AM |
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Very orginal in this challenge. This has a wonderful feeling of the cold artic blast that comes with a York Peppermint Pattie, according to the commerical. =o)
Seriously your dof used here is very shallow and works very well for this photo. Your lighting is really good, you have very limited shadowing. There is a wonderful texture here were you can see the fibers and also the grains of sugar.
I'm guessing you broke off the missing piece of the peppermint pattie cause it is so smooth and might have made more of a statement had it been bitten off with teethmarks visable rather than broken off.
It really is a cool photo and looks really good. Well done!
Anna
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07/20/2003 11:26:58 PM |
| I like this - very traditional, and amusing. I'd swear I see fibers from something like cotton, though - not sure if I'm imagining that or not, however. |
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07/20/2003 12:19:48 PM |
| Best illustration of subject so far... In focus and a really "cool" picture. |
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07/20/2003 07:22:37 AM |
| I get the sensation that 1000 little polyester fibers are stuck in my teeth. The little hairlike things are reall visable against the dark chocolate. Honestly, this is pretty good and a great idea. nice job |
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07/19/2003 06:01:22 PM |
| Super detail. Maybe a little close to the edge of the frame, but a cracking shot anyway. |
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07/15/2003 07:45:56 PM |
| I like this image a lot.. good work |
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07/14/2003 11:11:41 PM |
| Certainly looks cool, well composed. Good job. Critique: White area is void of much texture or detail, maybe a bit overexposed. |
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07/14/2003 10:39:06 PM |
| The background is a bit hard to figure out. |
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07/14/2003 10:37:05 AM |
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07/14/2003 09:59:42 AM |
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07/14/2003 06:57:15 AM |
| Nice simplicity, I like that in a photo. I think maybe the peppermint is a bit too close to the edge of the frame, and the image looks a bit flat in the top-right, but other than that I don't have any suggestions on how to improve it. 8. |
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07/14/2003 06:11:59 AM |
Cute! You know they're not made in York anymore...right? LOL
The only bit of distraction in the image is the fuzz from the cotton against the lower left edge of the patty. |
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07/14/2003 01:08:00 AM |
| very excellent idea and image 10 |
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