The idea of this photo is good but its difficult to figure out what your seeing. The point where the 2 ice cubes are "kissing" is being over shadowed by the blackness of the background and what seems to be another cube to the left.
Perhaps if you pulled back a little farther to show more of the top ice cube that may help. Also if you brightened up the photo all together that might help too.
Interesting idea. Took me a while to see what was the ice - the background makes it confusing. I think it would work better if the skin and ice werre seen against an entirely black background, and the spot of the "kiss" was centered or on a "thirds" line.
It's shame this isn't lit a bit better as definition as a bit too indistinct. A smooth-toned background would have helped show the shapes of the ice blocks too. A nice idea [5]
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