Very nice. Good focus on the eyes with a touch of softness and shallow dof. The colors are great. I would have cropped the left and top so that the blurred red/orange thingy gets removed. A tight crop of the face would still have impact as the eyes are very powerful. Great job. 7
You focus on her eyes is dead on but I find the blue and orange-red things detract from her, especially since one of the blue things seems to be melding into her cheek. Exceptional candid in spite of the detractors. 8